Sunday, November 21, 2010

Marco and the Temple of the Cybermen

A story by Tintin, age 7

Chapter 1

Once upon a time there was a boy named Marco. He was 9 1/2 years old. He lived with his mom, dad, brother, and cyber dog.

Chapter 2

Marco liked to eat Poppies cereal. He disliked soup and raisins. He was fat! His favorite color was black. He lived in a green house. Marco had a big brother named Jon.

Chapter 3

He had brown hair and eyebrows. His mom was pretty and nice. His dog was for the science fair.

Chapter 4

They heard a ring on the door. Marco's family was sick and didn't have any money. Marco answered the door. Cyber gave an ancient map to Marco. Marco made his family feel better so they could go on the trip. His family only had five dollars and the trampoline cost 100 dollars. They bought 5 dollar plane tickets to go to the Temple of the Cybermen in China.

Chapter 5

When they got to China it was nighttime. There were no people about. They slept at China Tree Hotel. In the morning they started their big adventure.

Chapter 6

They went to a dug up place. Then they felt something weird. They were turning small. Their father brought guns with them. They found the temple. They went into it.

Chapter 7

There were cybermen there. Marco's dad killed them. They got the treasure on their way back. There were more cybermen. Jon killed them.

Chapter 8

Then they left China and went back home to Italy. They were so happy with all the gold.

Chapter 9

Finally they bought Jon and Marco the big trampoline. They bought some chocolate for his mom and dad.

The End

Coming soon:

Marco and the Ape King
Marco and the Silver Moon Crystal


Grandma and Grandpa said...

We love your story!

The1stdaughter said...

Oh my goodness, that was spectacular! He's only 7? No way! Such a great story! Keep 'em coming and keep up the great writing!